Score: 9

"Very Tim Burton"

submission: Alice is Dead - Ep 1

date: September 17, 2009

I especially liked the walkthrough button! Seriously though, this is a great start to what I hope will be a magic series. My mother used to sing that song but I don't think she knew the words - now you've taught them to me.

Score: 7

"Sexiest Caramell yet"

submission: My CaramellDance

date: June 11, 2009

Like the others I liked the start, but after that nothing happened. On the other hand you've created the sexiest Caramelldanser, I think, out of all those on Newgrounds. Its good, but limited.

Score: 7

"Good but needs work"

submission: Hentai Sim Brothel

date: May 10, 2009

Firstly, I love sim date games, to which this was very similar. This sim was very playable to begin with, but by the time day 150 rolled round, the prospect of another 150 days of a game I had all but won was not very appealing. I had maxed out the building upgrades and advertising well before day 180 and was then given a task to build an opium room by 210! All my houses had opium rooms already. I also had 23 girls by day 180 and the job of looking after them all was tedious to say the least. Even the yakusa had given up setting fire to my houses! I soldiered on to day 210, but then threw in the towel.
My general comments are: (1) Throw in some random events to liven it up a bit. (2) The joker choice after the first few weeks is always events not money, because the money is too small to be attractive. (3) It needs some guidance as to what a girl needs to go up a rank, if that's a target. (4) The interface needs simplifying - I think LoP2 is a great example to follow. (5) Girls should run off occasionally, as in real life, providing a staff turnover.
I should add that I'm not a micro-manager by any means, I would say I was a fairly average, but experienced player. But it's still a well thought out and interesting game for all that. PM me if you'd like to try out any ideas.

Score: 8

"Dreamy"

submission: Far Journey *MixerMike*

date: March 11, 2008

This was music to drift away on - great for a certain type of flash. However, I found that endless 'piano' riff became irritating after a while. Perhaps you should fade it in the middle and reintroduce it at the end. I loved the way the layers built up at the start. Good stuff.